lovemynashty
Hey! It's not letting me comment on your book thing! ;( but what I wanted to say was that I thought your chapter was actually really good. A little short. But still good. I like how you're not making it a fall in love in the first couple chapters kind of book. And that's what I'm trying to do also. I hate doing this but can you read my prologue and first chapter of my fanfic? It's my first fanfic and I want good or bad criticism on it. It's okay if you don't! But anyways! It actually was really good! Keep writing!