perihelion-
Hello, dear! I just wanted to mention how wonderful your one shots are. They're so different from much of the stuff others have written! But, if you wouldn't mind, I've been looking for some advice. I've recently returned to writing fan fiction, but I'm unsure of how it's going. I only have one work so far, so feedback is greatly appreciated. Much love❤️ -The Mackster
perihelion-
Thank you so much for the advice! And the POV thing was just more for the fact they hadn't spoken. I'll work on trying to keep it to only one or two for a chapter or two just to see how that could make things easier. I appreciate your comments and will keep them in consideration.
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btc1916
it's definitely going to be a great story, i can tell! i would just stop changing points of view so much because it can get hard to follow sometimes. If i change POV at all, I try to only do it once or twice in chapter. Hope this helps!
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