btsfan756

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I don't wanna be rude and i REALLY appreciate your work but you really dissapointed me in MINE 2 ff. Jk abused her, cheated on her, slut shamed her, raped her and what not. What jk did to her is nothing compared to her pain. Yn only emotionally hurted him. And that time too, she was suffering from physical, emotional and mental pain. What jk and his gfs did only added pain to her. Yes, it was Yn's fault to suffer like that but let me tell you if you are brought up in such household with strict parents like yn was, it is difficult to raise your voice and stand for your rights. How would she stand for herself when her own father was an asshole?! You may not punish jk but atleast make yn and jk separate! Maybe they loved each other but what about Yn's past, sufferings and dignity?! If jk was not abusive, i wouldn't mind if they ended up together but here he was worse! Even if he was drugged, how could yn forgive him like that?! What about the times when he was normal?! He wasn't drugged during his wedding. What about that?! Jk did nothing good to her. She was all alone in her fight until the end. Then why was she thanking him?! And there was no need to apologise to him too! A simple sorry and done! Seriously, the plot changed so suddenly when jk got to know that he is getting drugged. 
          I am really sorry but everything that i felt while reading the ff got destroyed when yn chose to be with jk! I am NOT AT ALL hating you or your work but just the ending really dissapointed me!

btsfan756

@_InCoGniTo_1201_ thank you so much....i think its my responsibility to listen to the opinions of the readers...cuz you guys help us In improving...so thanks to you!!
            
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II-M00N-II

Actually, thanks to you that you didn't take my comment offensive. Yes, i truly agree that majority of people want happy endings no matter what. And even if it was your first ff, you wrote amazing! There were no mistakes. Plus, the presentation was beautiful! And you surely have written amazing books! The ending of this book was bothering me, so i couldn't stop myself. Otherwise everything was excellent!♥️  Once again, thanks for taking your time to read my comment!
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btsfan756

@_InCoGniTo_1201_ thank you for your honest opinion...... After writing the entire plot even i thought the same...would i do the same as y/n, if i was in the place of her???...and to that my answer was obviously no......and since it was my first story i really didnt know how to end it....whether to make it realistic or choose the opinion of the people...cuz both are very important for a writer!!!...but me being entirely new to this place,i choose the choice of the people cuz they wanted y/n to be with jk...i am not blaming them cuz who doesnt like happy endings..but i should have thought that not every story has an happy ending... I am really sorry that i couldnt please you...but i am trying to improve....i will make sure i will not dissapoint you anymore...thats my promise...afrer my exams i will try to make an alternative ending for that story.........thank you so much...for being honest!!!!!! I will try to improve it...thank you...have a good day and stay healthy!!!!!!!!!
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