Fiction_kahaniya

Hi there 
          
          I am sorry for posting something on your conversation board without your permission, but if time permits can you please read my storyf  and leave comments so that I can work more on it and understand if I am lacking somewhere 
          
          I would be very glad if you could give it a try 
          
          Tropes 
          ▪︎Grumpy girl ×sunshine boy
          ▪︎College love to story to adulthood 
          ▪︎Love at first sight 
          ▪︎He fell first and harder 
          # Guitar boy
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/342136828?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Fiction_kahaniya