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 *'The Hauntings' 
          	Hah I can't even write my own story's title

lolaroscoe

Hello. I really like how you describe things. I do not have much of that ability. I think I need to practice that. I also like the way how you can create long chapters. You can reach until three pages. How did you do that? You must be full of ideas.
          
          I read that you can critique. I would like you to read some of my books, I promise only a page of them. I am a beginner writer so I think my writing style is of low quality and most of them are short too. You can read even only the Chapter 5 of these books. I just want to know what you think, so if you have time, please. Here are the links:
          1. http://www.wattpad.com/64705811-parttime-power-5-be-something
          2. http://www.wattpad.com/62044436-i-was-there-5-the-crying-shards-leave-alone
          3. http://www.wattpad.com/65079471-bivouacked-5-the-lights-can-weep-erythrite
          4. http://www.wattpad.com/67776724-outward-love-5-brown-stars-having-lost-your
          5. http://www.wattpad.com/68907055-crossovered-directions-one-direction-fan-fiction
          6. http://www.wattpad.com/68123966-accepting-with-love-5-unexplainable
          
          I am hoping for your positive response.

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Hey 
            Thanks so much for having a look at my works, it means a lot. 
            Regarding the length of chapters thing, I don't set out to write a certain number of pages it just happens. The only advice I can give is try to think of events and ideas you want to reveal in each chapter and everything should fall into place in terms of length of chapters. 
            
            I'll try to have a look at the links you've provided but I'm super busy at the moment because I've just started uni so I can't make any promises. However if I can't get through them feel free to drop me a PM around about christmas time to remind me, if you're still interested in me critiquing. :)
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