bubblegum_space

I have been gone for a while and have neglected my book ‘My Trophy Boy’. To be honest, apart from life and other interests, I have felt for years now that my novel should have a structure, however when writing this story I was engrossed  in writing a story rather than creating and following a clear structure with a story-end. And to be fair my story is still incomplete and not ready to end. In fact the story is at a stage where the first climax has arisen and I want it to peak even deeper into the roots of the characters. However, a lot of editing needs to be done. I need to rewrite and add to the storyline so the characters are even more real and distinctive. The risk of this is the original tone of the characters which some of you might resonate with may change and I don’t know if the feel of the story will be the same in the ways that you will love. This is where I need feedback and avid readers who like this story to share their perspectives on the story and its adaptations. 
          	
          	-BP

curiouswombat

I have been following and read your story from the start, the beginning was my favourite part of the story that part felt real, the middle was where I didn’t feel the realism as much, towards the end it was half and half for me. I do love your story and I know you can bring it back and have the same feel to it as did the start.❤️
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bubblegum_space

I have been gone for a while and have neglected my book ‘My Trophy Boy’. To be honest, apart from life and other interests, I have felt for years now that my novel should have a structure, however when writing this story I was engrossed  in writing a story rather than creating and following a clear structure with a story-end. And to be fair my story is still incomplete and not ready to end. In fact the story is at a stage where the first climax has arisen and I want it to peak even deeper into the roots of the characters. However, a lot of editing needs to be done. I need to rewrite and add to the storyline so the characters are even more real and distinctive. The risk of this is the original tone of the characters which some of you might resonate with may change and I don’t know if the feel of the story will be the same in the ways that you will love. This is where I need feedback and avid readers who like this story to share their perspectives on the story and its adaptations. 
          
          -BP

curiouswombat

I have been following and read your story from the start, the beginning was my favourite part of the story that part felt real, the middle was where I didn’t feel the realism as much, towards the end it was half and half for me. I do love your story and I know you can bring it back and have the same feel to it as did the start.❤️
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bubblegum_space

Hi people,
          I’ve just re-edited the introduction which has a reimagined version of the main characters (at the beginning of the novel). I’m pleased with this, because as a viewer you can grasp an idea of the characters physical features, outfit appearances and profile descriptions.
          
          Share your opinions with me on the images I’ve embedded ;)