Yo, by any chance have you read "One Sided" a creepypasta x male child fic by Monkey12230? Your "Take me Home" fic is really similar to it and was wondering if you were using One Sided as an inspo fic? If so you should leave credit/inspo credit because both fics are pretty similar in many ways.
It feels nice to have my work seem appreciated and worth it! And it's all thanks to all of the peeps that take time out if there day to read what I have written.
It's under HUGE reconstruction. It was the first book I made and looking back on it I feel like I could have done a lot better. The full complete story should be up sometime before 2022.