So guys I finally updated coffee.
I'm not really that happy with how the new chapter came out, I feel like it's maybe rushing things a bit and that maybe the flow of the story doesn't feel natural?
I think it's because it's been so long since I wrote for that story, but if it does feel unnatural please could you let me know with some constructive criticism because I'd like to try and better my writing.
Thanks guys ❤️❤️