buggylizzy

Guys, I'm torn. Would anyone be interested in me rewriting "He's Mine"? No changes to the plot, characters or ending, but maybe improve the language and writing. Or should I just let it be, since with the mistakes, it keeps its old charm?
          	
          	Honestly, TDTID is my top priority and I'm already starting to plan my third book, so it's more of like a side-quest thingy, like it could be a slow process. I just find it kind of hard to read and ignore mistakes/errors that make me cringe, which is why I'm too afraid to read it again, especially the first few chapters xD

jeonjiminie130

@buggylizzy I honestly loved this book it's totally different from other books. Sure I have read books with toxic characters but they don't and like this. You didn't kill anyone and made them suffer for their own actions which could be avoided. I'm looking forward to read TDTID . But I'm not gonna lie after reading he's mine I thought I might need therapy sessions.
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buggylizzy

@ jeonjiminie130  thank you so much! If I do decide to edit He's Mine, it's something I would do on the side, while writing new stories as well, so don't worry :) Until I run out of ideas, I'll keep bringing out new stories! But as for now, I'm going to focus on finishing TDTID, so you won't have to worry :D thanks for reading my stuff!!
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jeonjiminie130

@buggylizzy I'm currently reading it and it's already well written . I would rather ask you to write more works instead but if you want to can still edit it if it helps you feel more satisfied with your work. Despite hating jimin and jungkook's character in this book I would say you did really good. Not many author make the lead bad guy or they will add some things which justify why they are like that. I always relate fiction's to real life and think what can I learn from this. My way of thinking is a bit different cheating is not a option but I have read many jikook ff's like this anyway . But in the end your writing skills are amazing all you need to do is to do is write more stories quickly and give us a total emotional rollercoaster.
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serendipity_euphoria

          
          Hello Author nim, I just wanted to say…that your story TDTID has officially become one of my favourite Jikook stories ever. No exaggeration. I LOVE this book.
          Your writing is honestly brilliant — every chapter leaves me with this melancholic feeling, like it hurts a little but in the most captivating way. It’s haunting, tragic, soft, and beautiful all at once.
          The romance hasn’t even fully bloomed yet, but I can already feel it slowly, faintly beginning… and it makes me so anxious in the best way because I care about these characters so much.
          This story has me completely wrapped in its clutches, and I’m genuinely grateful. Thank you for creating something like this. Thank you so much ! Patiently waiting for your next update .

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buggylizzy

@ serendipity_euphoria  This is one of the nicest things someone has ever said to me! Thank you so much for the long message, I think I really needed that today :) And I'm glad I'm able to create a world people find themselves immersed in! Much love!!
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