Sure! I think the concept is really cool and unique! I also like your writing style, very descriptive. The first chapter is short and sweet but just enough to draw you in. Really good writing, actually. And you can use basic grammar so that’s always a relief. I look forward to more from you and seeing how this story develops. I’ve never been good at character or plot development so I hope you can learn what not to do from my writing haha! Anyways i think it’s great!!