bunnyfaun

Taking a quick break for an hour. I’ve been writing for nearly three hours.

AkariStrife

Happy Thanksgiving!!!!!!!
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bunnyfaun

I got so distracted, there are two stray cats fighting outside, and I live on the second story and I feel really bad about it because it’s snowing and I wish I could help them out. I love cats ;-;

bunnyfaun

@AkariStrife thank you, and to you too!
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AkariStrife

@bunnyfaun Yep, and happy thanksgiving eve
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bunnyfaun

@AkariStrife that is very kind of them
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bunnyfaun

Minor detail, gaggle of valued readers: Do we want Lorin to remain at Hell’s Gate with Clay or do we want her and Clay to go to the Hallelujah Mountains with Jake and Grace and Norm? 

lexiboss2319

She should go with them. It might be easier for her to get to grace if they’re in the jungle
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bunnyfaun

I forgot to write it in whether or not she goes
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bunnyfaun

Getting back into the swing of writing again, I took a break to reassess the timeline because I wasn’t sure what I’m doing is lining up and I’m glad to say it’s on track with the film! I’m also planning out the sequel the best I can and some epilogue for this one to connect the pieces, but we’ll see!

AkariStrife

It’s ok, I understand
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soap__pill

Maybe something’s wrong with your WiFi is it glitching in or out?

bunnyfaun

I’m going to switch my progress over to my laptop on Microsoft word, I think that should work out and keep my progress, but I’m not sure ngl
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bunnyfaun

It’s just that it’s very expensive and there more than me using it. The job hunt is not very easy where I live
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bunnyfaun

I keep trying to write but then the WiFi goes out and I shut just type this all out on Microsoft word or something man, because so much progress is missing

bunnyfaun

@AkariStrife Not criticism by the way! It’s very good and I don’t want to discourage you from writing how you want! Writing isn’t easy and sharing what you work on is also very challenging! More authors means more original ideas and I think your work is very unique and interesting, I haven’t seen someone try to write that idea yet, the basis of The People’s Cry, I mean. You’re doing really good!
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bunnyfaun

@AkariStrife all good though so far, is there anything in there that you think needs work or direction? I like to pre-plan my fanfics now because it’s just easier to have a route to follow
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