npkfly

 
          
          Please try MY BILLIONAIRE HUSBAND
          
           
          
          Hridhaya always knew Karthick was bad for her blood pressure-grumpy, arrogant, and permanently stuck in rage mode. But when their families drop the ultimate MARRIAGE bomb and decide they should get married, she realizes she's officially living in her worst nightmare.
          
           
          
          HRIDHAYA:
          
          Marrying Karthick worser than to.....
          
          ❌ Be buried under a mountain of cockroaches.
          
          ❌ Watch a three-hour TV serial in slowmotion
          
          ❌Worser than being struck in an elevator with a nosy relative
          
          But no. Instead of living my peaceful, Karthick-free life, I'm now stuck in a wedding I never signed up for-with him, Mr Always Angry, cactus Karthick. The man who argues with me like it's his full-time job. The human equivalent of a landmine. The man whose favorite hobby is getting on my nerves.
          
          This isn't a wedding. This is a hostage situation.
          
          KARTHICK:
          
          If someone had told me I'd be married to Hridhaya, I would have laughed in their face. Or screamed. Or maybe jumped into a crocodile-infested river-less painful than this. I hate her
          
          Because marrying Hridhaya?
          
          ❌ Using a blunt razor on the face and ending up with battle scars.
          
          ❌ Worse than being stuck in a never-ending WhatsApp family group.
          
          ❌  Worse than getting stuck in traffic right before reaching home when you really need to pee.
          
          She's bossy, loud, and has an answer for everything. And now? She's my wife.
          
          This is not a marriage. This is a lifetime sentence.
          
          The Real Problem?
          
          Between petty sabotage, accidental attraction, and a wedding they never asked for, their battle isn't just about avoiding marriage anymore-it's about surviving it.
          
          Because the more they fight, the closer they get... and the closer they get, the more dangerous this game becomes.
          
          Brace yourselves. This isn't just a wedding. It's all-out war. 
          
           
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390508897?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=HopelessRomanticPoo
          
          

author_Rumi

Hey! 
          I saw your messages on my book. I see you’ve been reading some chapters. Do you mind giving me your opinion about my writing and the story? 
          Just to know if I am going on the right path. And what I can improve. 

author_Rumi

Thank you for responding. I can understand the uncomfortablity. If you decide to continue reading, just letting you know, there are only 2 or three chapters like that. 
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burkinawubblybun

@author_Rumi hii, your story is reallyyy good, loveee the initial chapters, the characters aesthetics and the writing is feelsy too without any ott stuff. Unfortunately, my curiosity got the best of me & I took a peek at the last chapter and I'm out now  didn't like the marriage part & that torture whatever after that. Personally, found it a bit uncomfortable to read. Would've liked a separation with betrayal only.
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aapki_premika

@burkinawubblybun I told you, improve karungi. Bass emotions, and words improve kr diye. Tumhe story pta hai tohh, suggest nhi krungi. But, okay, if you want to try, if* , tohh Ek chapter ko dekhke tell me. But mai new chapters regularly upload karungi ab, Bas exams ke baad. Abhi exams tak, saare chapters ache se wapas upload karungi. 
          Btw thankyou 

crmsnpen

Hi dear, would you please mind checking my book? It'd be so helpful! And please, don't forget to leave a feedback :) 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/358291264?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=mayaascoming

burkinawubblybun

@ahavaenoch Hey! sure I'll give it a read. The intro & prologue sounds perfect!!!
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