Just so y'all know, I am participating in this thing called NaNoWriMo, in which I have to write 50,000 words in the month of November. These all have to be words in the same story, by the way. Message being, I'm not going to be able to work on any of this until December.
Thank you so much for taking time to comment on my story, I appreciate the feedback. I'm not sure if I'll change much but I'll try to tie up any loose ends. I'm curious, are you interested in the plot? Would you continue reading it?