Abby

Hi, I just published the first chapter of "This Christmas"
          
          I have currently been revising this story and have been working on it for a few months trying to get the motivation to figure out my direction for the story. 
          
          Hopefully everyone likes the story, and I would appreciate any feedback from anyone.

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Hi, I have just published the first chapter of my new book “The Monroe Girls”, if you can, I would like some feedback on how people feel about the concept and my writing.
          
          And also, last  year I had started a different book, I wasn’t quite sure what I wanted the plot of the book to be so I stoped writing it and unpublished the chapters I had published to rethink and revise that book. I will pick that book back up and finish writing once I can figure out how I want to plot the book.
          
          

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Thanks for the follow. I hope that you enjoy reading my books.

Hi, I have just started writing my first book titled This Christmas! I’m hoping that you guys could check out my first chapter and the alternate  first chapter and tell me which story line you guys like the most!
          
          Thank you if you check it out and no worries if you don’t; I’m just looking for some honest feedback!