Thanks everyone for your comments and feedback on my gumiho story! I made a lot of changes based on it. And now, I finally finished my first novel! it has gone by different names (A Soul Worth Saving, and Kiss of Death) but now that it is finished I changed it again. I also switched the POV from first to third and added the POV of Elijah Park.
It is always a work in progress so I hope you will have more comments! But I need a long break before editing it again.