byaprilwinters

Confession time…
          	
          	Living  inside Dylan and Catherine’s heads for the past few months has done things to me. I need a palate cleanser before I start side-eyeing every couple at the coffee shop.
          	
          	So I’m thinking about posting a casual side project. No schedule. No pressure. Just something I write when the main story needs me to breathe. This will not delay Choice or Storm. The Brennans come first. Always.
          	
          	Two options. You pick.
          	
          	POLENTA CHIPS — A love story. London. A Norwegian chef meets an American woman at a Killers concert. He makes a very good potato gratin. She has strong opinions about fries. I have absolutely no idea where this is going. No outline. No architecture. No plan. Just two people and a city and whatever happens next. You would be reading me write without a safety net for the first time and honestly that terrifies me more than Dylan’s comment section.
          	
          	THE BRENNANS: UNCOMPLICATED — Short stories from the Brennan family. No plot. No drama. No affairs. Just who these people are when nothing is breaking. The warm stuff. The stuff I write when I need to remember that this family is more than the worst thing that happens to them.
          	
          	Vote in the comments. Or don’t. Either way I’ll go water my plants for now. <3

byaprilwinters

@ShannaSparks0 Storm is coming next, right after Choice wraps. It is not posted yet.
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ShannaSparks0

@byaprilwinters is Storm another story? I don't see it on here.
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Wendy-578

Why do I feel like The Brennan’s uncomplicated would have the potential to piss me off more because seeing them warm towards each other being them a family unit is going to make hate Dylan and Riley more ‍♀️
          	  Screw it The Uncomplicated Brennan’s 
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Littlesister72

I seem to be in a minority but I’m really glad not have every plot point and the ending clearly signalled. Writers who say “new hero” and HEA or whatever spoil half the reading pleasure for me. 
          
          This is an adult story, for adult readers, would we expect a physical book to give away the ending on its back cover? 

byaprilwinters

@Littlesister72 Thank you for the generous comparison <3
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Ange1047

How many more chapters should we expect for Choices
          

TarieB

@Ange1047 does Catherine find out about Cockwomble and Twatbag (ie husband and whore) in these 19 chapters?
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byaprilwinters

@Ange1047 there are 19 chapters in Choice
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byaprilwinters

Confession time…
          
          Living  inside Dylan and Catherine’s heads for the past few months has done things to me. I need a palate cleanser before I start side-eyeing every couple at the coffee shop.
          
          So I’m thinking about posting a casual side project. No schedule. No pressure. Just something I write when the main story needs me to breathe. This will not delay Choice or Storm. The Brennans come first. Always.
          
          Two options. You pick.
          
          POLENTA CHIPS — A love story. London. A Norwegian chef meets an American woman at a Killers concert. He makes a very good potato gratin. She has strong opinions about fries. I have absolutely no idea where this is going. No outline. No architecture. No plan. Just two people and a city and whatever happens next. You would be reading me write without a safety net for the first time and honestly that terrifies me more than Dylan’s comment section.
          
          THE BRENNANS: UNCOMPLICATED — Short stories from the Brennan family. No plot. No drama. No affairs. Just who these people are when nothing is breaking. The warm stuff. The stuff I write when I need to remember that this family is more than the worst thing that happens to them.
          
          Vote in the comments. Or don’t. Either way I’ll go water my plants for now. <3

byaprilwinters

@ShannaSparks0 Storm is coming next, right after Choice wraps. It is not posted yet.
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ShannaSparks0

@byaprilwinters is Storm another story? I don't see it on here.
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Wendy-578

Why do I feel like The Brennan’s uncomplicated would have the potential to piss me off more because seeing them warm towards each other being them a family unit is going to make hate Dylan and Riley more ‍♀️
            Screw it The Uncomplicated Brennan’s 
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Lost999

Hi @byaprilwinters, I really enjoy your writing style, but I’ve noticed in your replies to people like @AndreaSalasGarza and @Caressab that you mention the story is meant to feel like 'real people' in the 'grey.'
          
          To be honest, it feels like you're avoiding a clear answer on whether the cheaters get a Happily Ever After. For those of us who love this genre, seeing a cheater get redemption without even asking for it or earning it just rubs us the wrong way. We’d really appreciate a clear-cut answer: is there a traditional second-chance arc where the hero actually earns his place, or is this a story where the affair partners are the endgame? It helps to know the direction before we invest more time in the journey.

Lost999

Thanks for the reply, @byaprilwinters. I appreciate you acknowledging that the 'real people' angle can be frustrating for readers like me who look for a specific kind of growth and resolution. Honestly, you're so polite that I'll definitely be following your journey as a writer.
            
            I understand that it’s your story and your vision, but I have to be honest: seeing cheaters with zero remorse or regret being played out as 'normal' is just very unsettling and morally difficult for me to get behind. However, your kindness makes me want to give you that 'trust' you're asking for, so I’ll stick around for a bit longer to see how Chapter 19 lands. Regardless of the outcome, I really do admire your writing!
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byaprilwinters

@Lost999 You're right, I keep referring to the story as real people in the grey. I'm not trying to be evasive, confusing, or a tease. That is the story I'm trying to tell and I don't see it fitting into traditional cheater tropes. I don't know how to explain that without spoiling the reading. 
            
            I know I'm a new voice and I'm asking you to trust me before I've had the chance to earn it. If the direction determines whether you continue or not, I'll offer you this: Chapter 19 ends the story. You can read it on its own when it's out and decide whether to go back and read the full story. 
            
            Either way I'm thankful for your time and readership and hope to see you on future projects if Choice isn't for you.
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Talk2me2

Hi - since there is no HEA or HFN and since the story doesn’t build toward a clear outcome or resolution and I find myself wanting a clearer conclusion, so I’m curious, what experience were you hoping we would have instead of that sense of closure? What do you see as the central purpose or payoff for this book to us as readers?

byaprilwinters

@amy082617 Without giving spoilers... more is coming
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byaprilwinters

@Talk2me2 That’s a really good question. The book isn’t built toward a clean ending because life doesn’t hand us clean endings. People are complicated. Most things land in the grey. My hope is that by the end you feel like you spent time with real people, not characters serving a plot. Whether that’s enough of a payoff is something only you can answer. But I think the mess is where the interesting stuff lives.
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aaran664

Maybe these book is for like cheaters I don't know the author is somewhat trying to state that cheaters can also have stable and steady life like 2-3months affair they are have familiar touch cudding instead of having trill excited sex ,means are you trying to justify 
          

amy082617

Ok; am I understanding how the sequence is going.  So Choice is husband having midlife crisis and making choices like having an affair instead of making his wife a top priority!  Like seriously he couldn't meet her for at least 4 days when she was vacation but went away with OW for 4 days.   There will be no definitive ending in the choice of HEA or HFN.  Book 2 STorm is Wife POV in different stages of their marriage.  Will there be a book 3  where is it's both wife and husband POV and what happens after the affair?  

byaprilwinters

@aaran664 I hear you. I genuinely can’t answer that without giving away the ending. All I can say is the book takes the affair seriously. If the not-knowing is too much, you’re welcome to wait until the book is fully posted and read the last chapter first. It will tell you what kind of story this is. Then you can decide. I hope you’ll stay but I understand either way.
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aaran664

@byaprilwinters @amy082617 hi  can you clarify that their is so punishment or regret for these cheaters  I hope those is no HEA for any couple out here please Just inwill read the book I don't read book with cheaters happy ending please I want read will clarify want I am into these story
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byaprilwinters

@amy082617 Thank you for reading and for piecing the structure together. You’re right that Choice won’t deliver a clean HEA or HFN. Storm is Catherine’s story but it’s set in one specific period of her life, not across different stages. It puts her at the center in her own voice. As for what comes after, the Brennans have more stories to tell. I hope you’ll stick around.
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