bychiaraye

✨ Update! ✨
          	I’m so excited to share that I’m currently writing the second part of Elara and Rowan’s story!
          	“Beneath the Crest: Echoes” is in progress, and I can’t wait for you all to dive back into the secrets, tension, and forbidden love at Crestmoor.
          	If you haven’t read the first book yet, check out “Beneath the Crest” so you’re ready when the next chapter begins.
          	Thank you so much for your support, your comments, and all your love for these characters. Stay tuned — more is coming soon!

Batz_Maru

Hi, I've finished reading Detention for Two and currently reading Detention for Us. And I would like to just say that I love both stories. The way your weave your story, it feels like I'm reading a poem, a prose. But not Shakespearean-way kind of prose which kinda hard to follow what's with the phrase and old-English words. And I can't help holding my breath everyt time I click the next chapter, filled with anticipation for Ivy and Carter 
          I'm currently writing a story myself, if I could ask you to check it out and maybe give me feedback, that would be much appreciated. Thanks! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401540852-the-one-that-got-away-eng

bychiaraye

@Batz_Maru Wow, thank you so much! It really means a lot that you enjoyed Detention for Two and Detention for Us  I truly appreciate you taking the time to share this. I’d be happy to take a look at your story and give you some feedback
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luciouslumps

Hi!!, I’m currently reading “beneath the crest” I really like the writing but the story just seems kind of lifeless?, there’s no inbetween, just scenes. I think what would help if you had longer chapters, or some filler chapters Just some constructive criticism

bychiaraye

Hey!
            Thank you so much for your feedback – it really means a lot ✨
            And honestly? I felt the same while writing it.
            This is one of my first stories, and I think I got so caught up in the emotions that I kind of skipped the in-between parts 
            
            I’ll definitely try to work on that and add a bit more depth and flow.
            Really appreciate your honesty 
            Thanks for reading anyways!
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bychiaraye

✨ Update! ✨
          I’m so excited to share that I’m currently writing the second part of Elara and Rowan’s story!
          “Beneath the Crest: Echoes” is in progress, and I can’t wait for you all to dive back into the secrets, tension, and forbidden love at Crestmoor.
          If you haven’t read the first book yet, check out “Beneath the Crest” so you’re ready when the next chapter begins.
          Thank you so much for your support, your comments, and all your love for these characters. Stay tuned — more is coming soon!

bychiaraye

 It’s happening.
          
          After all the stolen glances, all the tension, all the “I hate you but I’d die for you” energy –
          
          I’m officially writing the sequel to Detention for Two.
          
          Get ready for more Ivy & Carter.
          More late-night tension.
          More jealousy, heartbreak, closeness they shouldn’t want – but can’t escape.
          
          ✏️ Title: Detention for Us
           Status: In progress
           Vibe: Second chances, broken trust, and that one person you can’t forget.
          
          Thank you to everyone who read, cried, screamed and fell in love with these two.
          This one’s for you.
           #DetentionForUs #DetentionForTwo #EnemiesToLovers #WattpadRomance #ByChiaraRaye