Agentshell144
hello, I really need views on my book https://www.wattpad.com/1523070733-the-other-side-of-nowhere-chapter-1-deformed-rat please check it out
byellekerr
Rel1c-
Bro, you have some decent work here. You need to adversities more. Seems like a better story than mine!
byellekerr
That actually means a lot I’ve put in a lot of time and work into it so hearing this is awesome! And also I’ve been reading yours and it’s on my read list now I’m very intrigued!
EstherAWritingWizard
Just started reading your story seeing that you are looking for feedback. I noticed that your paragraphs aren’t separated which isn’t a criticism, but would make it easier to give advise on individual sentences/paragraphs. Besides that, from what I read, it looks pretty good.
EstherAWritingWizard
Sorry, I didn’t mean that it was hard to read. It just when the paragraphs are separated you can add individual comments on each paragraph instead of the chapter as a whole. The reading experience was fine.
byellekerr
Feedback is always welcomed and appreciated