Atlantaes
Hey love! I only read a few chapters since I have a lot of other books to read, but I've enjoyed what you have thus far in your book! One suggestion I have is to add more visual imagery and details in your book. You've nailed down the dialogue, don't be afraid to add some visual imagery to really set the stage for the scenes and immerse the reader. I definitely find the book to be entertaining nevertheless and packed with potential. Keep up the great work!
byeolHeex
@Atlantaes OMG!!! YOU ACTUALLY READ MY BOOK!! OMG!! Thank you for the Review. I needed it Seriously! I can't believe you actually read my book. Thank you for that! Really. Thank you so much! I love you and your works. Stay happy and well!!! ❤️
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