byysixteen

Hi everyone! Just want to tell you that Chapter 3 of Endless Solace up! Enjoy your reading everyone and
          	
          	Happy New Year 
          	

0mayasbookshelf

falling again is such a well written book however, i feel like there isn't enough, yearning, slow-burn, tension, jealousy. often in the middle of the book they're a bit in limbo and it becomes monotonous-  elenas reasons for ghosting dominic seem bizzare too - like his supposed girlfriend said a comment so she ghosts him for 3 years??? 

byysixteen

Thank you so much for saying my story is well written. I understand what you mean, and honestly, even after finishing it, I also felt like some parts were missing. I really appreciate you pointing it out.
            
            I was trying to show how misunderstandings, overthinking, and an overprotective family can slowly ruin a relationship, but I agree that it didn’t come through strongly enough.
            
            The good news is, I’m currently rewriting the story, and once everything is ready, I’ll update it again. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts
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byysixteen

I’m thinking of posting the prologue earlier than the planned date. Are you guys ready?