Thank you so much for saying my story is well written. I understand what you mean, and honestly, even after finishing it, I also felt like some parts were missing. I really appreciate you pointing it out.
I was trying to show how misunderstandings, overthinking, and an overprotective family can slowly ruin a relationship, but I agree that it didn’t come through strongly enough.
The good news is, I’m currently rewriting the story, and once everything is ready, I’ll update it again. Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts