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AHHH THANK YOU SM!!! I def think yours has potential too!! For advice I think reading a lot of books has helped, also going into detail about specific moments and just being able to focus on characters really helps!! For readers, it was just time tbh. I have no idea how I got readers 

sorry i’m just seeing this :// my LEAST favorite celebrity might be shawn mendez  idc something abt him just irks me

@c42000 (Are we talking abt where there’s a train and two tracks separate with 1 person on it and the other 5??) If we were, going to be 100% honest with you, I’m one of the most indecisive people. It really depends who are on the tracks, if that one person on the track is my bestfriend and the other are 5 random people, they can die. But if it’s random people, then the 1 person can die, my question is how tf they got there and how I got in this situation if this were to happen.
            
            Q- Who’s your least favourite celebrity?

@Neptune8649 yeah working your @ss off only to never get the place you want :// I crave a lot of hot fries and sour patch kids LMFAO, it’s unhealthy AF but they’re just so good  
            
            Q - what do you think about the ‘trolley problem’?

It’s so hard to type on a phone .,.

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Awe it’s fine dad hope u don’t stress alot

@Neptune8649 hmm, try thinking of interesting things to keep the reader interesting, maybe a sudden love interest, sudden accident (fatal if you want), sometimes you don’t even have to make them longer!! foreshadowing. things that the reader might question but never think about too long, then have something super sudden happen involving that foreshadowing!!

You’re welcome!! Peridot is nice, it reminds me of Steven Universe. I’m currently writing a book, any tips on how to make the chapters longer?

AHAHA that’s so sweet, thank you!!! i like peridot because it’s my birthstone!!