@darknessinsideofus I find it quite hard to find well written Naruto fanfics on Wattpad. There are a couple I do like, but the majority ain't so good. But I got to say, this book is one of the well written ones and it definitely needs more recognition.
I loved your original characters. They fit in perfectly as if they were actual characters of Naruto. The build of of their characters and the relationships they shared were very heartwarming to read. My favourite being Hayate and Ichiko's relationships with Minato, Kushina, Fugaku and Sakumo. I absolutely loved reading the story of Hanabi's parents. It was so cute despite ending with a tragic death. The character development was just very well done and I thank you for writing this beautiful piece.
Hanabi and Itachi's slow burn romance was sweet. Thank you for not rushing it. Fanfic writers tend to do that a lot. But it was very intriguing, reading their journey especially with how much Hanabi changed the plot line. I'm still amazed with how much she impacted it. I was a bit worried when she had prevented the coup d'état, as it is a big part of Naruto, especially Sasuke's character but you filled in the plot holes and delivered a story that still made sense. I'm proud of you for doing that.
I like how you perceived Itachi and his character. It made him feel more human. I loved reading from his POV's and just how you expressed his emotions. Very well done. I specifically liked his reaction and recovery to the 'death' of Hanabi. And I'm happy you included Izumi. It was interesting seeing Itachi interact with her. And I liked how she wasn't mean to Hanabi. You didn't include that cliche drama, thank you.
Shisui and Hana was such a cute addition. I'm very happy Shisui got the happy ending he deserved!
I also enjoyed reading Hanabi interact with everyone. Sasuke and Naruto interactions were another favourite. Protective older sister vibes.
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