caesitas

I have just read the beginning of your story 'Blood Traitor' and just wanted to ask if you would give this story a second chance and work on it again because I was catched at this first chapter. This story has great potential like 'the auction' or "menacled' had.
          Its written in the view of draco as an outsider which could give the story so much more diversity.
          Please contemplate.
          

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