caitlin_margaret

Thanks man

I just realized the story you were talking about and yeah, it was pretty good. Wish it was longer though 

Umm idk what's it called?

Nice update by the way, I saw you took my advice. I'm assuming it helped?

Okay I just finished your story and if I'm being honest, I liked it. I liked the plot a lot but I think you can (and should) expand a bit more. However, there were a few grammatical errors that I mentioned in the comments. I also think you definitely need to write it in a book/story format, for example, using quotation marks when someone talks instead of dashes and more dashes when the person talking switches to what they are thinking---
            "Ugh what do you want Granger?" Draco scoffed. 
            "Nothing from an annoying ferret like you Malfoy," Hermione snapped back.---
            That was just an example of the quotations marks thing. I hope I helped you and please don't think of this as hurtful, it is meant to be constructive (not even gonna say criticism bc it wasn't even considered), and I hope you continue writing bc siriusly, your story plot is amazing

Yeah for sure! I'm really sorry I'm just now getting back to you by the way, I have been completely swamped w school work even though I'm on winter break rn

@dramoinefangirl ahw I'm glad you do!! And an early happy new year! xx

Np even though I'm really late, I loved your story