Music1001
Hey @calismo5678 I would love for you to check out my new story, 'I Kneed The Bad Boy In His Family Jewels' and tell me what you think. Tysm❤❤, Music1001
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calismo5678
Of course I can! I'll read a couple chapters at first cause I'm still reading a novel but I would be honored too!
Nickelodeon7856
Hi, if you are free can you please check out my books and give feedback. Thanks so much!!
calismo5678
Of course! I would love too I'm among finished with a novel and I will definitely check it out!
calismo5678
Ok so I read the first chapter of your book and you have a great idea going, I think I only saw like 2 grammar errors but the only thing is so much is happening at once. Matt has anxiety then talks about his sister then has a Panic attack then his parents come in then he goes to school and then he sees the girl.
It's a lot to digest and understand and can make it very confusing.
So what I would do is break it down
All those things that happened in chapter one make them into a chapter of there own and go into detail
Once u accomplish that I think your book will go a long way!:)
calismo5678
Of course! Once I'm finished reading my current book I would love too
calismo5678
I LOVE ETHAN EVERETTE
calismo5678
PSA PSA PSA: EVERYONE GO READ THE BEST DANG SERIES ON THIS EARTH
THE BITE SERIES BY ZeroWhineThirty
I promise this will make u die an cry the rest of your life because this is so good when it's published and made into a movie I'm going to be the first one in line
calismo5678
No one has been updating:(
calismo5678
We'll I kinda cracked my phone
calismo5678
@jennifer_coolgirl sure
calismo5678
Sure but today it's a big day for so it might be short but I will update again later