calliste

sorry i have been away for a while... something happened with our creative freedom. sometimes it becomes so bleak that you don't where where to start and how to end a journey...
          

i have a challenge for everyone. can you answer me this question: What makes a good story? please feel free to post your comments.

Hi, how’s it going?
          
          So sorry for the delay in updating my story………I had assignments to complete. I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and fan me !!! ;-))  I will take out time to read your works !!!  Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story chapters- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/535720-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          

Hi,wassup?  I have uploaded the THIRD chapter of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" I would very much like it if u could read it and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favour for ur works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story 
          http://www.wattpad.com/482278-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right

Thanks so much for commenting !!! I loved ur critique. U are asking me to go the Harry Potter way, whereas I am going the Dan Brown way !!! If u have read his books, u must know how he weaves an intricate web of words describing each scene. 
          Regarding how u thought it became a bit predictable, I think u were referring to the end of the prologue. All I can say is that appearances can be deceptive !!! Please keep on reading my story  and commenting. Vote and fan if u like it !!! I will read ur stories in turn !!! 
          Again, thanks a lot !!!  ;=0 

Hello there, before you completely stop reading ; please hear me out? (: 
          Although I'm just another author here on Wattpad, I would really appreciate it if you could check out some of my stories. Any compliment is welcome, but I'm really looking for criticism; even if harsh. I want to know the basic ways that I can improve as an author, a writer, and just overall as a person. If you're interested in helping me out, I've included two summaries below from a few of my stories. If you don't have the time or the care I'm sorry I've wasted your time but I wish you the best in your own writing and/or/ reading. Take care! (: 
          
          Summaries ; 
          
          "Past the moonlight." 
          
          "Bliss's older sister, Amelia, has always been the center of attention - the center of the universe. Bliss has always been following her, mimicking her every spoken move. So when Amelia takes her life unexpectedly, Bliss can't seem to know who she is. Worse of all, she feels as if she could have prevented her sisters death. Bad boy, Logan disagree's; he wants her to forgive herself. But Bliss can't forgive easily, not until she let's Amelia go. And she doesn't want to, not quite. Not until something changes hastily again, and Bliss has to make a decision that will change everything." 
          
          "Your Pants Look Better On My Floor ;)" 
          
          A story about a troubled teen, named Tomorrow. After loosing her father, she and her mother don't get along too well. Living in a shadow for so long, Tomorrow realized how unhappy she is. So after getting arrested and having to move into a foster family's home, she feels as if this her last chance to prove to be someone. And that cute boy in the next room? Well, that's just part of the adventure.

Hi, so i'm just going to go out on a limb here... *gets down on knees* Please read and comment on my story >_< its called "What are you afraid off" I'd love ur critic , don't worry i won't get offended or anything i grasp the tough luv concept lol
          
          I'd really appreciate it
          Thanks a ton :)

@Just-Nikki 
          hey nikki, im not really a good critic. and i don't really think i can criticize properly.  but anyway, I’ll try to give you the best of what I can do.  I just do hope you won’t end up offended. Because I’m not really good at it.:)
          
          
          
          

@Deep4141 
          i would be very glad to read your story. but you see im not really good in judging people's work.:) but i will try my best to speak my mind when i get to read it.

Hi, I have uploaded the prologue and the first chapter of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" I would very much like it if u could read it and comment on it.Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favour for ur works. Thanks in advance !!! Here's the link to my story - http://www.wattpad.com/468645-the-underworld-relocated-right-into-my-town