@VilzMeCrazy im done reading your story. Since u ask me to read that, I leave my comment there. Its a constructive one. :) thats my opinion as a reader.
Im not a writter btw but since u state in ur bio that ur our writter, i leave my comment as your reader. :)
btw, thanks 4 reading my story and following. :)
congrats to your 1st story! :) way to go girl! :]
~Hetty