Moonstruckhypen

gurl first and foremost you ATEEE with story!!. But for the first Chapter its a lotttt. And your grammar gurlllll. Also, you ''i'' need to be capitalised. PLEase. loveeee it already

Moonstruckhypen

thats good gurl, im just trying to help a girl out.
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camrin_storyteller55

@Moonstruckhypen ok firstly i fixed a lot of errors in my book ,ok. i love that u love and incase u didn't know be mistakes can be corrected.
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