Alright, I haven't made this offer to anyone else, but I will for you.
If you decide to have your vampire series published, and you REALLY should, I will help you edit it first.
Years ago I used to work with a traditional publisher. At various times I was both a content as well as copy editor, and also did final test reads before general publication. So this isn't a valueless offer.
Your books are genuinely good enough. If you want to get them edited to prepare to submit for traditional publication (or even for self publication on Kindle), I will help you.
I'm not really looking for anything out of it; like I said, I'm not in that line of work anymore, but these books are good--really good, and you deserve to see them in print.
Cheers, Mari