captain_ainsworth

Hey, The Captain, were you ever an inkie/inkpopper? Just wondering, and sorry if this message is completely random. 
          
          Carrie (former inkie) 

I am ALWAYS up to it :D

like i said, thank you for the comment!  i wasn't expecting someone to get that much out of the first two chapters, but i'm glad someone did. i'm especially surprised that you thought i'd sprinkled the culture in the first, because i thought all i did was mention their names! 
          
          yessi and bianca's relationship is going to be developed further into the book,  so i understand what you mean about them. but, you're not necessarily supposed to like bianca. it all depends on what you see in her. my only rebuttal is that bianca's stomach IS pudgy, despite seeing her ribs. people store fat in different ways, you know?

Hey I saw some of your critiques and I was wondering if you would be up for possibly reading mine. I'd like some feedback and yours seems honest. I respect that :) But anywho, if you could read what I have so far it would be much appreciated! It's http://www.wattpad.com/2049831-school-number-2

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Haha, don't worry! I accidentally voted for my story too one time. It doesn't matter, but you're right, it is pretty awkward, isn't it? Oh, well. You can't un-vote something, so just laugh about it. :P

Me neither,
          weeeell if I post anything.

Yes, of course you do silly duck.

Hi