CaptainRusBy

Cover completed :333

Hey, so i decided to edit and rewrite 80% of my story :P. I just thought about the world and how much the beastdom didn’t fit. All this time I’ve been worried about personality and reaction and things that make a character iconic, that I forgot about the basic of a good story, the world. The beastdom was just too bizarre and was a lazy way of explaining Aidan’s and Jerimoth’s powers. To make it interesting there has to be an explanation to those powers. Now, using a little science and questionable reasoning, I try to explain their powers... the beastdom is now the Sicurodom, meaning safe kingdom. They’re a group of earthlings who survived and thrived in the Forrest until dark secrets were discovered and they went into hiding. I have no idea what’s going to happen to shade, but it doesn’t really matter because no one cares about shade anyway.

Ok! So chapter eleven is out! If you find the source from the anthology, hello! Why did you come here (And why did you click conversations)? I chose this chapter for the reason that it was easier to start from than chapter ten (a better chapter I couldn’t use because it made no sense out of context). Anyway, thank you for coming ;3

Iv’e been off for quite some time, but even during my breaks I am re-working my stories and constantly trying to solve the obvious problems such as Aidan’s impeccable aim with only one eye...

Hey there! Have you ever written, let’s say, eight chapters then read them only to find out that they don’t make any sense? Well that happened to me so chapter nine won’t be coming out until I’ve edited all of the previous chapters. Thank you for your patience.

Whoops. Wrong link hahahaha. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/183455873-the-horror

Im also going to make new art for my profile picture. One that's actually mine.

Ok. Bonfire is evolving. I thought the plot of my story was too confusing due to the lack of backstory and describing paragraphs. Everything has changed (the names and Jerimoth's character design is the same) from the day their parents died to the ending that will be harder to write  in comparison to the other chapters. Be prepared.