Hello Caramaldonuts!
Your book was pretty interesting but please write some more mystery or adventures. I know you can be really good at them. I didn't really like the recent book you made " Homework excuses in Hogwarts". Please don't write anything mean about Harry Potter, but your book was quite...eh funny.
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