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So I received some messages for me to continue with reverie and I wanted to say that I'm actually done with the book but have withheld it from here since I'm going to sell it. However, it has been edited and is different to some extent from the previous one so I'm going to post the chapters here for you guys as a thank you for the encouragement and interest.

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Hi everyone. So I have a new adult fiction novel that I've newly completed named 'the commencement address" I'm in dire need for readers to please help me go through and share their reviews. Thank you so much in advance.

Same to u dear.  :)

chapter 8 of reverie is out. enjoy. don't forget to leave comments and votes. thank you. xo

@NerdyAjet Thank u so so much. I'll work on the assignment. Just because of you.

nice work, your writing style is remarkable :)

I opened my heart to you
          I didn't want to, but you made me
          With your big heart, and your warm smiles
          You drowned all my fears.
          For a while you fixed me
          And I felt whole again
          Inspite of the scars, I felt cherished
          You became my best friend
          Because  you made me love again
          I threw away the pain from the hurts
          I figured if you could love me
          So unconditionally, then no one had any excuse
          From the strength of your total acceptance
          I could feel normal again, priceless even
          But then you broke it.
          Not because you meant to,
          But because you wanted more.
          You focused not on the beauty you saw
          But on the flaws I tried to ignored
          You started thinking of how you could mend me
          Because suddenly I was no longer enough
          So I'm retreating again
          Not because I hate you
          But because I'm selfish enough
          To be the only one that I love.
          Because I know
          That I'll never hurt me
          And even if I do
          I'll love me enough to forgive.
          
          
          
          It's just a little poem. I didn't know where to put it, so I'll just share it here!

Just updated reverie. Added chapters 5,6 and 7. Sizzling. Enjoy. xO

@john_chan. you're welcome. check out reverie for me will ya, nd tell me what u think. just inbox me ur review.