carol2514

Kindly review this poem and give me your thoughts.
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Aquan_

☆Hello!☆
          
          I'm really sorry to say it, but I have to unfollow...
          If you think it's unfair, or anything, you can unfollow me too, since I know it's not nice when someone unfollows you...
          
          Sorry again....
          
          °•~Further explanation is in my last announcement~•°

carol2514

The nights are long n days r filled with sorrow...its like being haunted in an ancient house, trapped in yo own train of thoughts yet hearing only screams.screams of yo pain, yo silent tears as they hit the floor
          You feel like giving up because with each passing day it becomes worse.
          Life has been throwing dirt on you for how long u can remember.yo at the brink of death coz u have no strength to keep persevering, yo bones are weak there s no more energy in them.
          You open your mouth to speak but yo barely audible as a result of yo dry throat..u wish a drop of water would wet yo bruised lips.
          After holding up for so long one day you lose it...so you grab that rope, you take that piece of cloth get hold of yo broken chair, or run down the path to yo lovely forest...n you tie thy neck..just like movies u have seen yo entire life passes before u like a flash..u manage to crack a smile coz yu think u gonna leave all yo pain behind....and just as yo about to pull through with yo plan.....u miss yo footing and fall down