Nomii

@A_EmptyEntity And you my friend, I’m also trying to text you on your page but you haven’t replied yet.

@carrorot Good to know, and I also hope that author would continue updating their story as it’s only 2 chapters so far.

@carrorot Glad your feeling better!! Take your time writing and I am excited to continue reading more!! 

@carrorot Hello? Did you read my text?

@carrorot
            I have no issue with you writing a Gojo one alongside the Toji one if you are motivated to do so. Just make sure you don’t burn yourself out by writing multiple stories at once and overwhelming yourself. But yeah personally I wouldn’t want the Toji one to get scrapped since I think it has a lot of potential and I’m already invested in it XD. But regardless I know that you’ll cook no matter what, so I’m down to read both depending on your choice!! But if I had to choose between the current Toji one and a new Gojo one if writing both at the same time doesn’t work out, I would choose the Toji one for a few reasons. 1. You already started on that one and I’m invested in how it plays out. 2.Toji is a more unique option in my opinion compared to Gojo, as much as I love Gojo I feel like there is more room for character development for Toji considering his past and overall character, as you already have shown in your story. 3. Toji is strong but not too strong, Gojo literally can only be killed by like 5-7 characters in the entire verse at most, so RBD wouldn’t really have an impact on the story, and plus I feel like you could make more interesting scenarios and tense situations for Toji compared to Gojo. So yeah I’m down for both, but if I had to choose I would choose the Toji one. Hope my answer is satisfactory!! 

Fun fact, there’s a story with Gojo as the protagonist (the younger one) on fanfiction.net called ‘Arrival of the Strongest’ by DontSayItOk13, if you would like to have a look at it yourself.

The Chain of a Thousand miles and Playful cloud will have use in the future

Oops I forgot to @ you, I don’t know if it gives you a notification here if I don’t XD
            
            @carrorot 

Honestly I just think the story has been fantastic so far, as I said in a previous message, really the only main critique I have is that Toji seems a bit slower then he should be when it comes to figuring things out, I feel like he should have realized far sooner that Elsa was the one who attacked him and Satella, he is too smart to not tell after all the hints he got. (I.E Hearing Elsa’s voice, Seeing her at Rom’s Place, the daggers and sliced stomach etc.) I feel like that would be more then enough for someone of his intelligence to realize who she is. Other then that I really don’t have anything to critique!! This has been amazing so far and I am very much looking forward to seeing what you do with it!! I think you have been doing just fine regarding the power scaling!! Both times that he died it made sense, one was to protect Satella, the other was from a lack of information on Elsa and the world he is in. The ONLY thing I could think of that maybe I could mention is regarding whether you think Toji could have survived Elsa’s slashes, since (SPOILERS FOR JJK) Awakened Maki survived black flashes from Sukuna, which I would personally believe is stronger then Elsa’s slashes, but I think what you did is fine. Although he could have maybe healed from it since Heavenly restricted users seem to have a advanced healing factor as long as the damage isn’t too severe, but again these things can be left up to your interpretation which is why I don’t find it being an issue, since it’s up to you to decide what attack should be too strong for Toji to Survive and live through.
            
            
            (Really the only thing I have left to say is more of a question/confirmation if anything. Does Toji also have the Chain of a Thousand miles and Playful Cloud with him? I know I asked about playful cloud before but I just wanted to ask again since it wasn’t mentioned or shown yet, and I had been wondering about it.)