The_Confuzzled
Hey Casey! I started a new story and it would mean the world to me if you could read it and give me your thoughts on it. It's rather short so it shouldn't take much time. I just wanted to know my areas of improvement and whether I should continue writing it or not It's called 'The Darker Place' https://www.wattpad.com/story/257989965?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=The_Confuzzled&wp_originator=FhVsyO%2FomLUBTctkoC6hmmxnd%2BXHUwp%2FQGhQdJ2oCmm7jWc1ZYdcXhO7%2BJD0T93rrGO1iaQiFrFV9AtAAL9AialnIUJASfFQe3b2VQRayyT8yggj2LtSU6Ix9hT0Y5OA Enjoy