casejwhite

@TheEvilQueen13 
          	Sure! :D

The_Confuzzled

Hey Casey! I started a new story and it would mean the world to me if you could read it and give me your thoughts on it. It's rather short so it shouldn't take much time. 
          
          I just wanted to know my areas of improvement and whether I should continue writing it or not
          It's called 'The Darker Place'
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/257989965?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=The_Confuzzled&wp_originator=FhVsyO%2FomLUBTctkoC6hmmxnd%2BXHUwp%2FQGhQdJ2oCmm7jWc1ZYdcXhO7%2BJD0T93rrGO1iaQiFrFV9AtAAL9AialnIUJASfFQe3b2VQRayyT8yggj2LtSU6Ix9hT0Y5OA
          
          Enjoy

AM-Prabeswar

Hi Casey, thanks so much for reading and voting on "A Grace of Crowns" recently (and also for the follow!) It's very much appreciated! I hope you like the story so far, and stick around for the rest :-)
          Have a great week!

AM-Prabeswar

Aw thanks! I’m glad the guide helped.
            
            It’s also the same way, I try to say hello to everyone who comments/votes (it’s hard to keep track and often I miss some people), but you’re one of the few who actually responded! Ha ha
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casejwhite

@Amanda-Mae oh wow! Thank you so much for noticing! You’re the first ever author to actually notice and say thank you. I really appreciate it! And yes I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! Sorry I haven’t commented much on it but I was so hooked that I just HAD to keep reading. But I love A Grace Of Crowns to bits!! Thank you so much for creating such a creative and captivating story! So many twists!! 
            
            Also that guide on how to pronounce everyone’s names and what’s what and whose who was super helpful. Thanks!!!
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