@typixalprincess- I'm new on Wattpad so I don't know what you meant by "rate". But if I go with my own definition of rate, then I'd rate your story two stars out of five. It's quite fun to read, with the way you express the character's emotions through drabble and stuff. But I'd definitely rate this three stars if ever you decide to give some time in editing your story before actually publishing it. Aside from using expressions and slangs like a real amateur, I've also seen a couple lot of mistakes throughout the story, in capitalization and spelling?
Though I don't know if my comment would be useful...seeing as a lot of stories that use the same style you used in yours are really popular these days and are very likely to be published(though the reason why is beyond me)