Hey Cassie,
Thanks for reaching out. I did take a look at your story, and I think you’ve got a lot of heart in your work. That said, I want to be upfront and fair: your writing style just isn’t quite in line with the kind of fiction I personally connect with or read often, so I might not be the best person to give feedback or vote authentically.
I don’t do vote/comment swaps unless I genuinely enjoy the story, because I believe support should come from a real place. I hope you understand, and I wish you the best with your writing journey.