Hi babes! I love your story All I Wanted, but could you please please PLEASEEEEEEE proofread and go over the book? I love it so far but I’m only on chapter one and it’s killing me! Literally it’s perfect ALL you need is:
Commas: ,
Periods: .
Some quotation marks, here’s an example: “Oh my gosh! Wow, Adriana you look stunning.” Said Perla.
And spaces for dialogue in different paragraphs:
“Thank you so much! But I must say, those heels are gorgeous! Your such a good friend Perla, what would I do without you?” I said
“Girl, I don’t know what I’d do without you too.” Perla said coming up to hug me.