maxonwife

You know, I don't know if you noticed, but "The Shattered Sunshine" is very different from your other stories. I discovered your profile because of it, and I found this story so disappointing, but I'm glad I gave your other stories a chance because they were wonderful and so different from this one. The biggest difference is that I feel Shattered Sunshine is very slow-paced; it has a lot of text and little dialogue, and that makes it very boring. I read and read, and it seemed like it wasn't going anywhere, and I didn't connect with the characters because there was no dialogue. Your other stories change that; they are completely different. I don't know if you notice that too.

lillywritesx

Hi! I know this is your space, so apologies if I’m overstepping by posting here. I’m a new writer and recently started a short story collection called Yaadein. It’s a mix of romance, drama, and emotional moments that I think fellow readers might enjoy.
          
          If you’re interested, I’d love for you to give it a chance 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/399287595?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=lillywritesx
          

Awfellia

Heyyyyy long time no update , hopefully you're doing well

Awfellia

@Awfellia oh take care , no rush ❤️  
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castilloalexa08

@Awfellia hello, sorry for the late update, aside from adjusting or having some changes in the story and the characters, i faced some problem in my health so i can't update, but RN im doing fine so i'll be updating few chapters today.
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