catchadoggybone

Attention all Lila's new best friend fans, a blooming flower prologue is out! I repeat a blooming flower prologue is out! Go check it out, it'll be a big one and even will contain lore on why sapphire hates Marinette!

karinawrts

Hey, sorry to post here without permission. This is my first story, I would love to get your feedback. Your support will be much appreciated. 
          
          Thank you❤
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/402662675?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=karinawrts

karinawrts

@karinawrts Thank you @catchdoggybone for reading my story. This is my 1st time writing a story so there may be some mistakes. 
            
            From my POV, she is thinking that the binding thing may be hallucinations becoz of extreme fear. 
            
            And when u wake up and see a ceiling, I think the 1st thought should be of hospital. If u can see and think, then u r not dead. 
            
            I hope u get my idea. Please continue to support my book.
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catchadoggybone

@karinawrts alright I read it. Though there were someone questions I had right off the bat while reading it. Why'd she originally think she was in a hospital before realizing she wasn't? Why a hospital specifically, if she was dead wouldn't she think she was in the after life before realizing that she had been reincarnated? Though I did like how you did in the system, in most beast world books on here, the main character has so many OP advantages and doesn't really struggle to survive all that often unless in a fight so I like how she's truly having to survive on her own and that the system isn't just giving her everything
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