To tell you the truth, I enjoyed your story idea, but not the actual writing. You use the words 'unique and rare' so many times just in the first chapter and the summary, that it really annoys me. And then you use completely unrealistic coloring of azure blue for the fur of a wolf.
After that, your writing starts to get confusing, and added to all of that, I really just lose interest. As I said, it's an interesting idea, but I don't think that I'll actually be back for more unless you do some major editing. And by that, I mean to your writing style, phrasing, and sentence structure. Not just your typos.
