alisynharder4

hi! I love your book When the War is Over. You have developed Clarence pretty well and I'm enjoying reading what is happening. my only
          advice would be to put a little more personality into Clarence, so readers can relate to her better! great job, I'm loving it! It would be so amazing if you could check out my book! it would mean so much to me to hear your opinion about it!

catickles

Thank you sooo much for the feedback I really appreciate it. ill take you advice for future chapters thx so much again. ill check ur book out too.:)
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