Mary

hello ^_^

hello ^_^

@epsilonnaught helllllllloooooo, awesome use of thermite. Finally have time, so will be looking and updating.

@Summzz So far so good. But what happened to her supposed bruise? Good job on making the mother a more realistic drunk/whore. Just make sure you don't over do it with the physical abuse with the drunk mother or else the story isn't special anymore. Also, I would suggest making the characters actions more life like b/c right now, they are a tad bit stiff. I hope this helps. Keep writing though, because you're writing definitely shows promise. Believe me, your writing is waaaayyyy better than most I have read (like those horrible people that have so many spelling mistakes and gramatical errors, grrrrrr).

I know these things are annoying, but could you please read my story. Only if you want to though. I don’t want to sound pushy. And if you feel like it, you could vote or comment, or even fan. And even if you don’t read it that’s ok I understand. 
          
          The Felidae Saga: The Mark Of The Tiger Book 1 
          
          SUMMARY 
          
          Raimelle Love was a kind and sweet person until her best friend dies in front of her eyes. Now she has a mark on her wrist that can’t be explained and her parents are sending her to boarding school to help her learn to forget her friend’s death. But the only thing she learns is her teacher, Mr. Stone, is not whom he seems. Raimelle soon finds herself in a dream, were she follows him into a new world. A world of Magic. Raimelle finds herself learning. Learning about her mark, about the mysterious Mr. Stone, and about what darkness lies ahead. But most importantly she learns to LOVE. But will that Love SAVE her? Or KILL her?

Hey,
          I was wondering if you could read my stories, 'The Transformation (A Werewolf Story)' and 'I was normal. Until I was changed into vampire.....royalty?!?' Pretty please comment, vote, or if you love it, become a fan!
          
          Thanks a Plenty,
          JaBooker =D