I just finished the story, very well done, I suffered along with the character at certain times, and I was very happy that they admitted their feelings in the end.
I liked the development and your writing is also very good, the creativity is admirable, I felt angry at Dumbledore the same way I felt in the movies (he was very well represented hahaha) and I was sad with the ending I confess, but that doesn't change the quality of the story in any way.
Thank you for providing such a good read, it would be a pleasure to read another story of yours about Sev if one day you feel like it.