caydanp

New REICHSTAG chapter out everyone! After a bit of a break I have come back to deliver REICHSTAG updates. 
          	If you haven't read it yet then PLEASE DO. This book is completely original and I would love to hear feedback.

caydanp

New REICHSTAG chapter out everyone! After a bit of a break I have come back to deliver REICHSTAG updates. 
          If you haven't read it yet then PLEASE DO. This book is completely original and I would love to hear feedback.

caydanp

On this day 1914 German and British troops engaging in trench warfare began to sing "Silent Night", it was originally trying to see who could sing over the other however soon they were singing in harmony. After a day of singing a voice from the German trench said in broken English, "You no shoot we no shoot!" And thus the Christmas Truce of 1914 began.
          Merry Christmas everyone

caydanp

Hey guys, I would just like to say, if you haven't already read my book REICHSTAG: Victories Shadow, it is my greatest writing and I really need feedback so I can finish writing the book in it's entirety

that1girl4him

Thank you for following :) would you mind giving my story a rate…thank youuu

caydanp

@that1girl4him alright,  I have read through the first 5 parts and a bit of the 6th part. So I have to say that I do not like nor read romance. So I will try to be neutral about this, however just know if I say anything harsh then that is probably  why,
            First off, I feel like it happened a bit too fast?  Like they never met each other and yet in a day they are soul mates? And the entire time Matteo has been rude and has treated her like garbage
            Second, I really REALLY hate blankXreader and this feels alot like one.
            Third, the girl said she was dating Alex in the beginning of the book, yet she gets over him in like, 0.3 seconds? And Alex just threatens her with a gun? Like they were dating for at least  a while since the girl said she was going to marry him, and yet Alex is willing to kill her and the girl instantly forgets about him as soon as she sees a hot CRIMINAL who treats her like garbbage?
            Fourth, the thing I hate most in this world, Matteo is willing to give up the life he's lived his entire, his mansion and even his life for some girl he met today and even worse she has been rude to him and he treated her like garbage. And, again I try not to be offensive but I am really passionate in my hatred for this trope, but a guy is not going to give his life for some girl. Men have feelings too, despite what the media says, were not going to give up everything just for some girl. in fact this is the reason why guys don't like romance, not because were heartless, but because it expects us to sacrifice everything for a girl who, for all we know, is going to dump us in a month. And it's not our fault, when men are young were taught by society that nobody cares about us, so we have to take care of ourself. There is a common joke among the male community that girls get all the sympathy while males, who run our society, are treated  like trash
            Again I don't mean to be rude but I am really passionate about this sorta stuff
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