c_bharg

Also "the conceit" doesn't look like its a short story anymore. Probably be 25000-30000 words.

Changes will take place to the second chapter of "the conceit."
          In "AI Aftermath" to introduce a new character in the next chapter, that of a commoner living inside the dome.

I see you've just followed me. Thanks a lot.
          
          Tony

Hi Bhargav,
          
          Thanks for adding MINDSLIP - you like science fiction which blows your mind, well this one will make your mind slip!
          
          My other SF novel is called VISITOR - you can find it on my profile and I think it is my best work, but the conclusion of MINDSLIP was what inspired VISITOR so one had to come before the other.
          
          Don't hesitate to ask if you have questions and comments on the chapters are always welcome.
          
          Tony