ccl123456

@HopelessRomantic_97 
          
          I really enjoyed what you have written so far. However, perhaps you could add more detail into your chapters to make them longer? Your book is a light easy read with a tidbit of mystery to keep a wider audience interested. 
          
          Like I said earlier, if the chapters were just a bit longer they would be more enjoyable. You could also add in a bit more information in some sections?
          
          Thanks for asking me for my opinion, it means a lot. 
          
           I hope to talk soon,
          Ccl123456

Elmika

Thank you for the follow, and for voting on Green Eyed Daydream. Would love some feedback if you can spare the time. xo

Elmika

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed Carrie and Tyler's love story. Your feedback means a lot. xoxo
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ccl123456

Thats okay! Personally I loved you descriptions and how you made Carrie and Tyler feel so in love. The differences between the characters, like Jonah and Tyler, were quite interesting and made the book more interesting to read. Green Eyed Daydream has been one of my favourite books on Wattpad!
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