ceces_pizzaaaaa

Im making a new account. It's @XxDenisStoffxX

Matharose111612

I read "Ash was the One" and thought it was okay but it's missing something.  It could use a little help. (Sorry if that offends you)

ceces_pizzaaaaa

@Matharose111612 it's OK  but what do think it's missing and I've been wondering what it's missing.
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Matharose111612

Ash Was the One sounds like a good book I would love to read it (I put it in my library!!) but can I make a suggestion? The description needs a little more, like what the plot might be about, and some challenges, or what what her life will be like when she becomes queen. Plus I don't know who Annie Marie is by the description. Sorry if I'm being to pushy. But it's your story and I look forward to reading it!!