cedricdeadricc

Hello!!

Hi! really sorry for the sp I'll take it down if you want but it would really make me happy if any of you read my first fanfic, I've never really written before so some feedback would be nice. Have a great day <3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/282423370-a-blacks-riddle

Hi Love!
          
          I was wondering if you would possibly check out one of my stories & give some feedback?
          Only if you’d like to, but it helps a lot<333
          
          Thank you sm, 
          I hope you have a good day ♡

So you commented on one of my vids recommending this story I just want to say LOVE IT it’s so great good job I love the content and how many feelings it has made me had it’s just perfect good thing you commented I’m obsessed now no one can’t say I don’t read 

Hi I am from tt you told me if I can plz read the story 

Hey, you commented on one of my tiktoks and I decided to be nice and check it out! I like the story so far. A few tips though, use more commas, it sounds a lot more natural. Other than that it’s really good, I’ll definitely keep reading! 

It's me from tiktok you posted on my comments it's pretty good I writing a fanfic myself